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Screenplay/script review with notes

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15 per session - Virtual OK

Whether you are looking to cut somethin down, punch something up, or just get a second opinion, getting a fresh pair of eyes on your work can make a huge difference. Sometimes just hearing someone else's thoughts can awaken new ideas and help you revisit your story with new priorities, even if you don't actually take a single note.

I will read your script or screenplay and give thorough written feedback which we can discuss via email, Skype, or phone. You can submit from any stage of the process or any level of experience: I will read the tenth draft of your first script or the first draft of your tenth script.

If you have never had a stranger read your material before, this is a great way to jump that hurdle in a safe, constructive, and low-stakes environment.

Please keep in mind at the end of the day the decision is yours to accept or deny anything I suggest, but any criticisms given are in the pursuit of a good story.

Training & Qualifications


I have a Bachelor's degree in theatre performance and a minor focusing on screenwriting. I have written scripts for stage and screen participated in a few writing groups. I also have some experience with screenplay coverage. I am not a professional writer, just someone who loves writing and believes in helping my peers get comfortable and grow.

Availability & Preferences


Once I have finished my review we can arrange a time for discussion.

Trading Preference: I’m flexible, just hit me up!

Reviews of Tony


Justin received session of Screenplay/script review with notes from Tony
Oct 09, 2017
Wow! More detailed than I expected. Very insightful and helpful work, I hope to use this service again!
Jane received Help with Attend a Simbi Swap Meet from Tony
Aug 10, 2017
Tony is a great supporter of Simbi!
Tyler received session of In-depth free-form interview from Tony
May 22, 2017
Tony is very patient and fun to talk to! Great dude!
Melvin received session of In-depth free-form interview from Tony
May 14, 2017
That was a lot of fun! Highly recommend!
Jane received Help with Attend a Simbi Swap Meet from Tony
May 12, 2017
Happy to have Tony in the Phoenix community!
James received Help with Writing a pilot tv show from Tony
Apr 22, 2017
I am still trying to wrap my head around it Tony has a real gift when it comes to presentation and being attentive to my request . i almost thought i ...was in the matrix when i opened his email .. Perfect ! more then I could imagine .. dare I say it was like he was reading my mind .....show more
Taylor received session of In-depth free-form interview from Tony
Apr 17, 2017
Tony is super fantastic to work with! He is very intuitive and kind! :)

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About Tony Moschetti

I love 1) theatre, 2) film, 3) podcasts, 4) comedy and 5) tacos de lengua. Above all that I love top five lists. I'm an NAU grad living in Gilbert, AZ with my wife, two dogs and our student loan de...bt. My degree is in theatre focusing on performance and my minor was in film focusing on screenwriting. I love acting, writing, and doing improv. The tortilla is one of the most perfect inventions in history and I am willing to discuss that at length. It is second in culinary excellence only to hot sauce. My wonderful wife is on this app as well, and much better at it than I am, so check her out too. It says I should have 1400 characters in this to have a strong profile. This sentence puts me at 708. Oh boy. I should throw some bigger words in. Copacetic. Verisimilitude. Enunciation. I try not to take too much seriously in life, but I love learning new things to broaden my horizons. I try to keep an open mind about the world and not get too cynical, even though cynicism is getting far too easy looking at the state of the world. But it's important to step back and look at the absurdity within any situation and to remind yourself that humor can always prevail, especially if you can find an outlet with which to express yourself. That's why the arts are so important. Apparently run-on sentences are too. I host a podcast interviewing local artists in the Phoenix, AZ area called Starving Artists PHX. Check it out on iTunes if you are in to that kind of thing. Alright what do we have now? 1509. Dope. I'm good.show more

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