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TV Screenplay Notes


25 per unit - Virtual OK - Posted Jul 19, 2016

I will read your TV Screenplay up to 65 pages and offer notes on structure, plot holes, dialog, format suggestions, and spelling and grammatical errors.

Subjective notes: If your screenplay is a sitcom, I will offer notes on joke appeal, but keep in mind that all humor is unique. If your screenplay is a spec, I will offer notes on whether it seems to match the tone of the show.

Training & Qualifications

I am a writer/producer who has taken screenwriting classes at UCLA and Second City. I will give notes in the same method I've given and received them at school.

Trading Preference: I’m flexible, just hit me up!

Reviews of Ryan

Mike received unit of TV Screenplay Notes from Ryan
Oct 15, 2016
Ryan did a fantastic job with my script and pointed me to a lot of resources to improve my story. Great communication and great person overall. thanks...!show more


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