TV Screenplay Notes
I will read your TV Screenplay up to 65 pages and offer notes on structure, plot holes, dialog, format suggestions, and spelling and grammatical errors.
Subjective notes: If your screenplay is a sitcom, I will offer notes on joke appeal, but keep in mind that all humor is unique. If your screenplay is a spec, I will offer notes on whether it seems to match the tone of the show.
Training & Qualifications
I am a writer/producer who has taken screenwriting classes at UCLA and Second City. I will give notes in the same method I've given and received them at school.