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30 per session - Virtual OK - Posted Jul 20, 2018

As the title says, I do critiques for stories. Most genres except horror. I'm not good at grammar, though. However, I can offer help in pretty much other areas like plot, characterization, pacing, etc.

I tend to only read a story once, going through each chapter thoroughly before moving to the next. If I like what I've read, I might do a second pass to check for anything I have missed.

I'm a polite reader. I don't use harsh criticism just to prove my point. With that said, I'm honest and blunt with my opinion, so I'll say what I like and dislike, and how you can improve.

My rate depends on the word count itself. I charge 3 Simbi for every 10k words, though that can be negotiated as per your requests. I'm quite flexible when it comes to these things. If you are interested, feel free to send me a PM.

Training & Qualifications


Been writing fanfiction for four years with 28 stories posted. Erm, that's all. XD

Availability & Preferences


I'm available anytime at the moment. Just send me a PM. :)

Trading Preference: I’m flexible, just hit me up!

Reviews of Kenneth


Rachel provided unit of Your personal tester for Kenneth
Sep 23, 2018
Great book!
Harrison provided package of Beta reader for novels for Kenneth
Sep 08, 2018
Wonderful to work with.
Alyssa received Help with Novel 1st Draft Read-through from Kenneth
Nov 27, 2017
I had an awesome time reading Kenneth's novel, and his feedback on mine was really helpful. Thanks so much!
Alyssa provided Help with Requesting for Alpha/Beta Readers for Kenneth
Oct 26, 2017
Super prompt with answers, very responsive to all communication.
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Inactive User provided Help with Requesting for Alpha/Beta Readers for Kenneth
Oct 14, 2017
Kenneth is off to a great start with his book.

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Fanfiction Beta-Reading
I'm excited to use Simbi because this is the only site where you can ask for help without spending a single cent. What's more, you get to exchange help with other people, one I'm happy to do.
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Request for beta-readers
I've just finished writing the third draft of my novel, and I need some honest criticism on plot, characters, pacing, and writing style. I have a proofreader already, so I have no need of any assi...

I'm excited to use Simbi because this is the only site where you can ask for help without spending a single cent. What's more, you get to exchange help with other people, one I'm happy to do.

About Kenneth Villa

Well, I can't say much about myself except that I'm just your average guy, albeit slightly different than normal people. I live here in the Philippines together with my aunts, and I'm quite happy desp...ite our everyday problems. :) I love a lot of things. Reading and writing first and foremost, and I'm a video game addict as well. Watching movies and animes is also one of my hobbies, though I tend to limit myself based on personal preferences and taste. I once tried music, playing classic songs like Moon River and A Time For Us, but I got tired after a few years, especially upon discovering my talent for writing. I love to draw too, even though I'm pretty much a noob. XD Basically, I'm quite the jack-of-all-trades. show more

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Kenneth Villa is looking for:
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  • Writing & Editing