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Beta Reader Sci-fi or fantasy

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20 simbi per unit - Virtual OK

I will read your sci-fi or fantasy manuscript and give you unbiased feedback. I will comment directly in your manuscript on the smaller issues, and give you a one page overall review. I will be honest, and strive to help you make your manuscript the best it can be.
Please be aware that I am not acting as a professional editor. I will not find all of the grammatical or typographical errors (though I will point out the ones I do find). Primarily I will be looking for bigger issues - for example, did you character say something that contradicts information given previously? Did you repeat actions in a scene? Are you switching back and forth between first person and third person point of view (accidentally)? I'll point out errors like these, and ask questions when something is unclear.

Training & Qualifications


I've been reading sci-fi and fantasy novels since I was 5 years old. I read about 200 a year. I know this genre, and I can give you some good advice for your writing. Or I can tell you if it's great and ready for the big time.

Availability & Preferences


Weekends

Trading Preference: I prefer being paid in simbi

Reviews of Amitra


Krystal provided unit of Resume Review for Amitra
Jul 12, 2017
Amitra took my suggestions and ran with them! I enjoyed it.
Mike received unit of Beta Reader Sci-fi or fantasy from Amitra
May 31, 2017
Amitra is fantastic. She read my entire novel and gave me awesome notes to improve the story. Thanks!
Ellynn provided unit of Farm Fresh Eggs (Denver Metro Area) for Amitra
Mar 29, 2017
It's always nice meeting neighbors 🌞 I look forward to future trades 👍🏼
James provided session of Mentoring for YouTube for Amitra
Mar 25, 2017
She knew what she wanted, asked plenty of questions and took notes. The deal could not have gone more smoothly. A pleasure to work with.
Savannah received unit of Beta Reader Sci-fi or fantasy from Amitra
Mar 14, 2017
Excellent work!
Caitlin provided package of Resume Consultation for Amitra
Mar 05, 2017
Amitra and her husband Karl were easy to work with, super nice, and I would work with them again! Thanks for your time! :)
Grace received unit of Beta Reader Sci-fi or fantasy from Amitra
Mar 05, 2017
Thanks for their great feedback
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Donna provided hour of One hour private yoga or group yoga for Amitra
Mar 01, 2017
Both Amitra and Kenrick are amazing people. Amitra is very nice and her son Kenrick is super funny.
Brian provided package of Send me your Resume for Amitra
Feb 08, 2017
very caring person, would do a deal with anytime.
Lizzy received Help with Funny, Unique Kids Story Ideas from Amitra
Feb 04, 2017
Amitra was nice and helped me. I can tell that she put thought and time into her ideas for me.

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About Amitra Schwols

I guess it's easiest to explain who I am by describing what I've done. I've earned a Bachelors degree in science, with an emphasis in math and physics. For fun I also earned a minor in English. I also... have a Masters in Public Administration. I've worked as a nuclear electrician in the Navy, a middle school/high school mathematics teacher in public school, an educational content analyst and curriculum writer, and a homeschooling mom. So, that's what I've done. I guess the other part is - what do I believe in. I believe that people are innately good, though they sometimes get led down a bad path. I think children, when given gentle guidance, can thrive a lot better than they do in a rigid structure. I believe in using science and research to determine public policy. Finally, I guess to tell you about me, I have to tell you a little bit about my family. I live with my husband, father, son, two dogs and a cat. I guess that's it - now you know everything important about me....show more

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