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20 per package - Virtual OK - Posted Jan 08, 2018

Screenplays have multiple purposes. Two of the most important of these purpose is to be able to tell a great, concise, well constructed story. And to be able to communicate to your team and crew from the words on the page.

I will read, review, and make suggestions to how your script can be better. Whether it be characters, story, plot, conflict, build up, resolution, or dialogue. I will make clear and concise subjective input on what I believe your screenplay lacks. And how to improve upon it.

I will communicate with you through skype, for 3 full sessions. We will go through the first 30-45 pages of your script and figure out what you are missing, or could be better at conveying to the reader.

Training & Qualifications


I am a ghost writer and screenwriter for the past 10 years. As well as a indie film director with experience in taking many scripts from page to screen.

Availability & Preferences


Afternoons and nights.

Trading Preference: I prefer being paid in simbi

Reviews of Paul


Alyssa received unit of My Netflix Top 5 from Paul
Jan 22, 2018
Paul was super easy and friendly to deal with. Based on my likes, he put together a list for me of movies I'm looking forward to seeing. If I had alre...ady seen any on the list he provided, he told me to let him know and he'd replace them. Very cool.show more

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About Paul Anthony

I have a passion for telling stories. As well as being on the receiving end of a great story. Great, sound, exciting stories. Stories that make you want to dive inside the screen and participate with... the characters. Overtime that passion has developed into a love for screenwriting, lighting, cinematography, and technology. Because nowadays you can pretty much find a story anywhere you go. I have been an Independent writer, director, and producer for the past 10 years after graduating film school. As well as an entrepreneur and business owner in the tech sector. I've accomplished two feature length films, 13 short films and 6 music videos, and currently manage a small film studio in Atlanta, Ga. My goal is to continue to challenge myself each and every day and chase whatever new Dreams are placed in front of me. My films, and stories of focus usually revolve around Religion, Spirituality, humanity, Dreams, the culture of life and Passing on. show more

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