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Developmental Edit - Short Stories
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20 per package - OK - Posted Aug 25, 2017
I will give suggestions for how to improve larger-order stumbling blocks in your story, e.g. flow, structure, character development, and plot.
Training & Qualifications
Professional Writing diploma
Master of Arts
10+ years as a freelance writer and editor
Reviews of Marion
Aleksa received package of Developmental Edit - Short Stories from Marion
Dec 30, 2017
As always, Marion is phenomenal at what she does. A great professional that I would recommend to anyone :)
Brittney received unit of Query Letter Critique - Novels from Marion
Nov 07, 2017
Marion was very helpful!
Josh received package of Proofreading (Grammar/Spelling) from Marion
Jul 18, 2017
She was very fast and very good at what she did. However, I was expecting an ability to also check for flow, which is a different service from her.
Niall received unit of Query Letter Critique - Novels from Marion
Jun 21, 2017
Really pleasant person, with great feedback delivered in a very timely fashion! A pleasure to work with, would do so again :)
Jason received package of Editing and Beta Reader for Novels from Marion
Jun 02, 2017
Marion provided a full edit of my 120,000 word book. It is precise and descriptive. Pointing out inconsistencies and weak plot points. I will be using... her again for any future editing I may need.show more
Aubrey provided unit of Beta-Reading by Professional Editor for Marion
May 23, 2017
Excellent to work with and a talented writer with great ideas!
Aleksa received package of Editing and Beta Reader for Novels from Marion
Apr 09, 2017
Marion is a fantastic editor.
I sent Marion my first piece of writing, feeling a lot of uncertainty and embarrassment; I did not feel my writing was... even worth being edited. Nonetheless, Marion gave me invaluable advice to set me up for future success and give me confidence in my story. Her suggestions, revisions and even the hard truths were all there to benefit me and I really appreciate all her amazing work.
Also, she is a very pleasant person to talk to!
P.S. I hope she doesn't edit this review like she did my story! hahahshow more
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