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After a long journey I've finished my first novel, Burden. A 123,000 word epic fantasy romance for New Adults.
I'm trying to grab attention and reputation with it before publishing and am seeking eyes on my first chapter. Afterward, if you liked what you read, please comment on the bottom of the website! If you found grammatical errors or suggestions please message directly

Alden knew living in the Shadowen Thieves Guild would come with a price, but when their latest target became the Princess of Ammos, he knew he couldn't pay. Taking the risk, he turns on his guild to return home the one person able to free the innocent Kingdom of Brimley—if only she would see to reason.
Trust and Valor are tested as Princess Mayli is faced with the quandary to flee or stay with the mysterious man. When so many Brimleyn refugees are out for revenge, it was her rogue who acted like a shield. But why would her enemy sacrifice himself when it was she who called for war?

Chapter one: The Ambush
"Squirrel’s eyes beamed as if he’d just found the lost treasure of Gezmek..."
http://www.theartofliz.com/burden-the-novel/

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Reviews of LIz


Clari provided Help with Read my 1st chapter: Fantasy for LIz
Apr 18, 2018
Awesome author and fast response :)
Nate provided Help with Read my 1st chapter: Fantasy for LIz
Jun 08, 2018
Liz is a woman with a gift. Her writing is eloquent and well written, phrasing it just right to pull the reader in. At first I felt bored as I've neve...r been good with slow openings and felt it may not be what I was expecting. That changed within sentences. Politics, drama, and magic permeates Liz's writing in every corner and I can tell from talking to her her passion and dedication to her craft is solid as stone. In fact, I was so impressed and enjoyed her work I extended a personal invitation to my writing group on Facebook. I'm so happy to have gotten to read your work Liz. Keep writing and enioy your time with us. :) Your friend, Nateshow more
Benjamin provided Help with Read my 1st chapter: Fantasy for LIz
Nov 15, 2017
Liz is super talented. Her novel is interesting and immersive. Her art has depth and is a fantastic respite from the modern world. I'm a big fan!
Jennifer provided Help with Read my 1st chapter: Fantasy for LIz
Oct 30, 2017
I enjoyed reading Liz's first chapter, and was happy to leave feedback for it. Looks like a great start to a captivating book!
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Inactive User provided Help with Read my 1st chapter: Fantasy for LIz
Sep 25, 2017
Loved the story can't wait for the rest of it....
Mi provided Help with Read my 1st chapter: Fantasy for LIz
Sep 23, 2017
Liz is a great writer. Can't wait to see more of her work!
Shiyashiya received unit of Art Critique from LIz
Sep 21, 2017
Liz is so wonderful to work with. The exchange went very smooth, I feel we both got what we needed. She's an amazing writer and artist, very quick res...ponses and a delightful personality!show more
Tyler provided Help with Read my 1st chapter: Fantasy for LIz
Sep 25, 2017
Liz is a good writer and very kind!
Kayla provided Help with Read my 1st chapter: Fantasy for LIz
Sep 23, 2017
Liz is a good writer and I enjoyed helping review the first chapter of their book. I was definitely close to being enthralled.
Adrian provided Help with Read my 1st chapter: Fantasy for LIz
Sep 18, 2017
A pleasure to work with, and a great writer!


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I reallllly wanna go horseback riding again. I'll paint your horse or you or whatever artsy thing you want. Local around orange county only. Preferably lake forest, Trabuco canyon, Nellie gaile, or...

Artistic exposure for my art and my novel. Looking forward to find and give support in my community with trading services and creating a friendly world.

About LIz Steinworth

I am LIz. My adventure in art began at a young age when I was able to comprehend that the strokes I made on a page were that of my own, and what I did was unique. Since then I’ve fed off that knowledg...e to strive to make art reflective of myself. Much of my inspiration comes from fantasy, a vigilante, and a desire to find adventure. With the maddening pull to explore a world far from our own, I’ve dug deep within myself to find it and since have begun my journey. Each piece has a sense of hope combined with loss. To accomplish this emotion, I use chiaroscuro to envelop my subjects deep within in shadows yet paint them with a defined elegance and warmth. Hoods hide secrets well but shadows are never truly black and there is much to learn from under the veil. Along with my fine art I have bee. Using my creative talents to write a fantasy novel usin my paintings as inspiration. Looking for beta readers and editors to help finish it. show more

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