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Fiction Critique - Up To 4500 Words

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25 per session - Virtual OK - Posted Feb 19, 2017

I will do an in-depth critique of your original fiction up to 4,500 words. Beyond grammar, spelling, and punctuation, I will give you my impressions on your sentence structure, writing weak points, crutch words, adverb and adjective use, descriptions, dialogue, characters, pacing, setting, and more. If you have specific questions about a problem area with your writing, ask for advice. If you have a hunch that something's not right with your piece, let me help you figure it out.

I specialize in fantasy and science fiction, but am flexible. No extreme gore or erotica, please.

Training & Qualifications


I have been writing for nearly 10 years. I write fantasy and scifi novels and short stories. I have good instincts about writing and can often see what's wrong with a scene when the author can't. I also have a good eye for grammar, spelling, punctuation, and sentence structure. My friends praise my editing skills and say I can deliver a tough critique with grace. Let me help you with your fiction!

Availability & Preferences


I'm available all day Saturday, Sunday, Wednesday, and Thursday, and I can reply to messages on all other days of the week.

Trading Preference: I’m flexible, just hit me up!

Reviews of Elizabeth


Feb 27, 2017
She was quick to get back to me, and even though she felt she lacked experience in reviewing screenplays, she gave me a lot of great feedback!
Dani received Help with What has been your scariest dream? from Elizabeth
Jun 29, 2017
Answered my question perfectly and in a timely manner!
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Jun 26, 2017
Elizabeth is a creative, fun, friendly, very intelligent woman! She is also very skillful with her hands (Beautiful writing) Thank you Elizabeth f...or all your understanding. You are a kind individual and it has been an honor to work with you! show more
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Jun 25, 2017
Elizabeth was easy to work with and follows through on her commitment
Jacelyn provided unit of Calligraph a phrase of your choice for Elizabeth
Mar 26, 2017
Elizabeth was lovely to work with, super friendly and quick to respond.

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I'm a writer, editor, musician, and full-time learner. I love hearing about new experiences and I would love to travel the world. Countries I would like to visit include Korea, Bhutan, Iceland, India,... Peru, Scotland, and many more. I love ethnic food and languages of all types. I also have a desk job where I get to play with computer programs and office supplies all day. How cool is that?show more

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