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Edit/give feedback on short story

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25 for fulfilling my request - Virtual OK - Posted Jan 04, 2018

Sci-fi/steampunk fans! Editors/writers!
I'm looking for someone to look over some creative writing that my friend and I have been working on, to give feedback and suggest edits.

I'll pay 25 Simbi for the first 2000 words, and if we're both happy with the deal we can continue.

When replying to this request please describe your interest/experience and what you think you can best contribute - e.g., comments only or deeper editing suggestions. I'd love to pay more Simbi for the services of someone with professional experience of editing creative writing, but equally I'm very grateful for the input of avid sci-fi/steampunk fans.

Background: We're writing a short story in 'consequences' fashion, e.g. one person writes one instalment, the other replies with the next instalment, and we don't discuss the plot or how we hope it will develop. This does make for a bit of a disjointed story at times, hence the desire for an editor!

Thanks in advance for your interest!

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Inactive User provided unit of Translation English-French for Charlotte
May 29, 2017
Very nice collaboration with Charlotte, looking forward to working with you again!
May 09, 2017
Proofreading was super helpful!
Diana received Help with Be a Beta Reader for My Book from Charlotte
May 08, 2017
Charlotte addressed issues with my phrasing and clarity, and expressed her overall opinion of the chapters I sent her. Exactly the sort of feedback I ...need!show more
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Inactive User provided hour of Tutor data science Python/R for Charlotte
Apr 30, 2017
Charlotte was wonderful to work with. She knew exactly what she wanted and provided very clear specifications on what she needed.
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Mar 29, 2017
She replied fast and her caterpillar project is changing lives. It was interesting to learn about.
Joy left review for Charlotte
Mar 06, 2017
She didn't need me but glad she reached out for assistance.
Jonathon provided package of Crowdfunding Support for Causes for Charlotte
Mar 05, 2017
She's great! I hope I was able to help ~ ; )
KJ received Help with Testimonials for Simbi from Charlotte
Feb 27, 2017
Charlotte was so sweet to share her kind words about her experience thus far on Simbi. We are so happy to have her part of this community! Thank you C...harlotte!show more
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Feb 11, 2017
I was glad to work with Charlotte again. I can see great improvement in her Twitter account and she is getting results. Her work and interests are fas...cinating and I am glad to help more people find her. show more
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Inactive User received Help with Seeking Unique Frugal Living Tips! from Charlotte
Feb 09, 2017
Charlotte gave me several great tips for living frugally!


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About Charlotte Payne

I do academic research about things that make me laugh and cry. I've been doing this for a decade now, so I guess I have enough experience to offer anything to do with reading, writing, reviewing, ...editing, etc. I have some teaching experience too. And some basic stats knowledge - a lovely-but-far-from-perfect tool for trying to pick apart the complex patterns in the world - is also something I've picked up along the way. When I'm doing research, but also when I'm not, I love being outdoors, I love the way light completely changes how the world appears, and I love stories. So I can also offer local services like gardening, dogwalking, babysitting - but only if more people join near to where I live! And, of course, I'll very happily look at your art, and read and listen to your stories, and if you want it, I'll give you feedback. I like to meditate. I like being asked for directions. I like being asked to help with heavy lifting. I like foraging. I like being in forests. I like soil, mud, earth. I also like glitter, silk, bright colours. I like rough seas. I like experimenting with fermenting food and drink, and with making natural cosmetics. I like markets and fleamarkets and second-hand stores. I like running, I like walking, I like swimming, I like rowing. That's probably enough about me. Overall - life has been very, very kind to me, so I'm trying to pass some of that on! (Oh also I lived in Japan for four years, and I speak and read and write Japanese. I speak a bit of French too, but my French is really, really bad)show more

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