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Feedback on Your First Ten Pages
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10 per unit - OK - Posted Apr 08, 2020
Are you seeking agent representation for your book? Many agents ask that you submit the first ten pages of your manuscript along with your query. I will read and provide feedback on your first ten pages (double-spaced, the way most agents ask for). Unlike an agent's response, I will provide clear feedback on the overall strengths and weaknesses, and offer a few suggestions for improvement.
Training & Qualifications
I have been an avid reader for a very long time. I am also an aspiring writer. I love analyzing stories and what makes them work. I have a college degree and completed an Honor's thesis, so I'm very competent in the technical aspects of writing.
Reviews of Avery
Tristan received unit of Feedback on Your First Ten Pages from Avery
Jan 12, 2023
Avery was very helpful with her feedback. Thanks.
Katherine received unit of Beta Reader (Basic) from Avery
Sep 09, 2022
Such a fun trade! Avery gives stellar feedback, concrete and actionable, and I had a great time beta reading her project as well. I'm excited about wh...ere it's headed! show more
Susa received Help with Looking for Reader Review from Avery
Jul 19, 2022
Super-quick response and great communication. Thanks a lot!
Anne provided hour of Ask me about Buddhist practice for Avery
Feb 20, 2021
I appreciated Avery's seeking mind and natural curiosity to explore Nichiren Buddhist concepts, principles and practices. May our virtual connection ...be a stepping stone to allow her to continue to nourish her spirit. show more
Mary provided Help with Your First Impression of Pen Name for Avery
Apr 30, 2020
Avery was really prompt and kind. I look forward to working with her again in the future!
Melvin provided Help with Your First Impression of Pen Name for Avery
Apr 30, 2020
Wonderful and quick. I hope I helped
Tristan provided Help with Your First Impression of Pen Name for Avery
Apr 27, 2020
Glad I was able to help out Avery.
Levi provided Help with Your First Impression of Pen Name for Avery
Apr 26, 2020
Glad I could help Avery with my opinion.
I enjoyed working with her. :)
Inactive User
Inactive User provided Help with Your First Impression of Pen Name for Avery
Apr 25, 2020
Her request is easy to complete and I feel good helping.
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