I know auditions are coming up at Berkeley and various high schools in the area. I would be happy to meet and listen you your piece and offer a few tweaks to get it to where it needs to be. Basically, an acting coach for free. :)
Training & Qualifications
I hold a bachelor's in theatre, I am an Equity Membership Candidate (meaning I'm on track to become a stage union actor soon enough), I've directed at the college and high school level, and I'm currently on a 2 year minimum international children's theatre tour gig.
Availability & Preferences
Afternoons and evenings, I will be back in town after Jan 1st. I live in the East Bay, but I'm happy to meet you somewhere, but keep in mind if it's public, you would need to be okay with working on your piece in front of strangers.