I will give you feedback on your fantasy novel via Google Docs.

I will read through your manuscript once and give an overall comment on how I feel the story flows, its strengths and weaknesses, characterisation, plot, and any other things you'd like my opinion on. Then I will do a second pass and give more targeted feedback in specific sections, as well as noting and correcting any typos, spell errors, repetition and other grammatical errors that I find.

If your story has not yet been read by anyone else, please let me know so I can tailor my feedback to it more effectively. I am not squeamish about mature content but I am likely to be more critical of books containing rape and/or excessively sexist tropes. I prefer progressive fantasy over 'stereotypical' fantasy - all-male casts are fine as long as they're not furthering negative stereotypes about men.