Beta read my manuscript
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I'm writing a medieval fantasy tragedy and need readers to critique the overall story and how it made them feel, what confused them, what they wished was included, and the like. I'm not looking for spelling or grammar corrections unless there's something that is just preventing you from enjoying the work as a whole. Sometimes that happens. Please understand that I'll pay someone real dollars to do that AFTER I have a solid first draft 😉
The premise is a teen who is destined to be the Chosen One to save the kingdom, but the gods say no. It's a character study and commentary on mental health, faith, and society.
I'm trying to finish my first draft by Christmas 2020, and I'm about 10% in.
You can do this deal multiple times. At this point, there are about 12,000 words and I don't expect anyone to read it all. I would love to get repeat help, so let's say 10 Simbi for 1,000 words, but that's negotiable.
I'll give you the Google Drive link and give you access as a commenter. The only thing I humbly ask is that you don't pirate my work. There's no way I can stop you, so please just keep the Golden Rule.
I'd REALLY love your help! 😀