Review My Query Letter
Hello! I'm working on a YA fantasy novel. If you read fantasy books, I would love your thoughts on my query letter.
Query letters are sent to agents to entice them to read the manuscript, to consider representing the books to publishing houses. It is not supposed to be a summary of the plot, just enough to get them curious.
The query letter is only two paragraphs. I would like simple feedback.
1. Did this query make you want to start reading the book?
2. Why or why not?