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Proofreading/interestingification

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10 per unit - Virtual OK - Posted Aug 27, 2016

Help you express yourself without putting your audience to sleep.

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I use a method called e-prime. By rewriting your draft without using any form of the verb "to be," all sentences will contain an action verb somewhere. This invokes the reader's imagination and pushes them through the sentence. Your English teacher may have called this the "active voice" when they encouraged you to use it instead of the "passive voice." Example of passive voice: "it was done." Example of active voice: "you did it"

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I can't rewrite your work without you. This method invariably requires me to get more details out of the author.

Trading Preference: I’m flexible, just hit me up!

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