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Critique My Fanfiction

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15 for fulfilling my request Virtual OK - Posted May 09

I love this fanfiction like my own child, but I have no beta readers! I'd like for someone to read it before I post on Ao3 (new chapter every Wednesday), proofread, make suggestions, tell me what's bad and what I should do more of. I aim for each chapter to be around 2000 words, currently there are 7 chapters but the first few are not this length. I currently don't know how long the fic will be, but most likely at least 30 chapters, probably/hopefully more. The ship is Naegi Makoto/Fukawa Touko from Danganronpa, set in an AU where they live in the same apartment complex. Knowledge of these characters (meaning you've played both DR and DR:AE, at the very least) is highly preferred. P.S. Critique the existing chapters as well, please!

Reviews of Alistaire


Melvin provided session of Past Life Regression Hypnosis for Alistaire
May 10, 2017
It was great to work with him!
Arianna received unit of Anime Recommendation from Alistaire
May 04, 2017
Absolutely awesome and definitely knows good anime!:)

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Clear out my old room
I need someone to come by and just grab all the shit in my old room, put it in garbage bags, and take it to a dump. You can take shit if you find anything you like as well lmao. I just need the roo...

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About Alistaire Webbe

I have no valuable skills but boy do I have so much useless knowledge, hopefully I will be able to make use of it here. Primary areas of knowledge are spiders, rats, mental illness, divination, advice..., cosplay, and anime.show more

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